Merry Go Round Blog Tour for March: Writer’s Block

Writer’s block. I’ve been puzzling over this month’s prompt for weeks. The generally recognized definition is when a writer (or a painter or any other artist) sits down in front of that blank sheet of paper (or computer screen or canvas, etc.) and just can’t think of a thing.

I attended my town’s First Friday event this month and went to my favorite art gallery. This month they were doing  a color your own kite activity. I love it when they have a make and take in addition to the desserts and wine. Anyway, there was a small table set up and two pre-teens were sitting there kites already out on the table. The boy was busily drawing a blue bird with associated branches and such. The little girl was just sitting, staring at that blank, white, plastic kite. Her mother was trying various prompts to get her moving on her drawing.

Being enthusiastic about drawing, I got my kite out of its package and sat right down. There were some coloring sheets on the table, of butterflies. So, that’s what I drew on my kite, a butterfly. As her mother hovered, the girl sat there watching me begin to draw something equivalent to a 3rd grader’s efforts. That seemed to break her spell. She picked up a marker and began drawing a talking building, with trees and flowers and other buildings all around it. Was it watching someone make a fool of herself that broke the ice? I don’t know.

Have I experienced writer’s block? Sure, but in small doses. For example, a prompt for a recent contest I was interested in just left me cold. I eventually came up with a couple of ideas but they were so puny, I put them aside. Sometimes in the middle of a work, I’ll suddenly realize I don’t have a clue as to what’s supposed to happen next. I think it happens to all of us. I don’t know how other people get through it. I usually take a break, go for a walk, clear my mind of the panicked churning that’s going on and let my subconscious (or my muse) do the work. When I come back, I can focus; ask the right questions (what if? If she did this? …and then?), and get on with the process.

I did the same thing in high school and college with term papers. In that case I picked a topic (if one wasn’t assigned) and began the research process. Having some facts available to me helped. It also helped that a paper has a format: Introduction, Body, and Closing. I just needed to work in small bites to get through it. Looking at the whole thing can be daunting, not so much if it’s broken up into manageable chunks. It works for my writing too.

So, writers block. How does it affect you? What do you do to overcome it? Were any of my tricks helpful? Comments and discussion are welcome!

The Merry-Go-Round Blog Tour is sponsored by the website Forward Motion (http://www.fmwriters.com) . The tour is you, the reader, travelling the world from author’s blog to author’s blog. There are all sorts of writers at all stages in their writing career, so there’s always something new and different to enjoy. If you want to get to know the nearly thirty other writers check out the rest of the tour at http://merrygoroundtour.blogspot.com!  Up next: Jean Schara!

Flash Fiction Friday: Rescuing the Children

I was toying with this story idea and really want to expand the story. Here’s a flash version for now.

Rescuing The Children

Wilton handed the reins to his wife, Ruth. “You understand the plan?”
She nodded, “You’re going to break into the mage’s temple, get Helen and Jimmy and get out. I’ll drive around to the other side of town and meet you.”
Wilton rubbed his temple. “I’m sorry I ever decided to come into this forsaken town.”
She rubbed his back. “We didn’t know the mages here wanted young teens for their dark magic. Are you sure you don’t want me to add my power to yours?”
Wilton sighed. “I am. Black magic can blow back. I don’t want you soiled by it.”
He reached to wipe a tear from her cheek. “Wait for us as long as you can, but if there’s a problem,” his hand squeezed hers, “run the wagon out of town.”
Ruth started to protest then nodded. “Go get our children.”
Wilton jumped from the wagon, disappearing into the shadows of the street leading to the Mage Temple. She flicked the reins and headed to the meeting place.
At the temple, the only stone structure in town, there were no visible guards. “Warded,” he thought. He shielded himself then felt out the wards, one at each corner of the building. He applied pressure and felt the nearest ward break. He wiped the sweat from his forehead. He hurried across the street. He wondered about the ease with which he broke that ward. He hoped it was a measure of the town’s mages, and not a trap.
If the temple was a standard design, the mages would need a basement room, a space with bare earth as the floor. The nearest basement window had a light ward on it which he dispelled before it could scream. The lack of response worried him. Two broken wards should have alerted someone by now.
He slid through the window, crouching against the wall, listening. They could be distracted by a ceremony, he thought. He pushed the worry away. He produced just enough blue light to see the door on the opposite wall. Once there, he tried the latch, it wasn’t locked. Letting the glow subside, he opened the door a crack. The hallway was dark, so he slipped through, creeping along the wall to his left. He wondered if the dark temple might be set up in a counterclockwise pattern. He hoped going left wasn’t a mistake.
The hallway turned right. After a few steps a light showed ahead. There were voices chanting and the light grew. Wilton shrank into a doorway on the left wall. A procession appeared. Two acolyte torchbearers were in front, turning left. Two mages followed and his heart stopped. There were Helen and Jimmy, dressed in black sacrificial robes followed by two more torch bearing acolytes. The chief mage, alone behind the acolytes, was followed by three more mages.
When the procession turned the corner, Wilton leapt out of hiding and snapped the last mage’s neck, guiding him to the floor without a sound. He followed the procession into the ceremonial chamber and as the mages and acolytes moved around the central sacrificial pit, he blasted a wave of magic around the room, knocking the acolytes out and stunning the rest.
Wilton shot a healing wave to his children, who began to get up. The quickly recovering Chief pointed his staff at Wilton, shouting words of power. Wilton brushed the blaze of sickly green magic away, burning his hand in the process. He shouted to Helen and Jimmy, “Get up, get out the door, go left and wait for me!”
Helen wiped her eyes, grabbed her little brother by the arm, dragging him to his feet and ran to the door. The Chief sent ball after ball of the sick, green power toward Wilton as he backed toward the door. He grunted with the effort of holding the shield he’d put between the children and the Chief Mage. The other mages began stirring, he needed to move quickly. He pulled magic through the earthen floor and hurled it at the ceiling. It began collapsing on the mages as Wilton dashed into the hall.
Helen and Jimmy waited at the door the procession came through, Jimmy leaning against the wall. Wilton could hear the mages behind him, some screaming for help. The Chief was organizing them quickly.
“Hurry!” Herding his children through the door, closing it behind him, and up the stairs, he pulsed power at the lower doorway. Stones fell from the ceiling against the door.
“That won’t hold them long,” he pushed the children up the rest of the stairway. “Let’s go.”
Helen pulled the still unsteady Jimmy. Wilton tried to watch ahead and behind. The stairway ended in a hall, the main door in front of them. Helen opened it and a ward shrieked. She pulled her brother through and ran down the front steps. “Dad, which way?” she screamed.
“Right,” he pointed. He set a ward on the front door. It wouldn’t hold long. He ran after them. “Go!” he shouted, “Straight through town.”
They ran the few blocks to the edge of town. Helen shouted, out of breath, “Dad, I can see Mom!”
He looked ahead, a shimmer of green was between Ruth and him, “Stop! Helen, stop!”
She grabbed Jimmy’s arm and slid to a stop, dust from the street filming the green barrier. Ruth was on the other side, eyes closed and chanting softly. Wilton skidded to a stop next to the children. While she worked to open the ward, he turned to watch the street. He saw the mages coming just as he heard his wife sigh.
“Children, get on the wagon. Wilton, let’s go.”
He sprinted to the wagon seat. Ruth was already there. He slapped the reins, “Hi, hup, hup!” The horses began to run, Ruth watched behind. Behind the driver’s seat, the children were holding tight as the wagon bounced over the ruts in the road. She turned to them, “We’re away.”

The End
996 Words
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Goals Achieved for February

How I Did
February was a whirl. I did achieve my goals though, so hooray for that. Here’s the break down.
– Write 4 Flash Fiction Friday Stories (one per week)
Done! And they were posted right here on ConniesRandomThoughts.
– Update my Blog and Facebook Fan page (Both are titled ConniesRandomThoughts) weekly
Done!
– Continue to revise Recall
Finished! I’m still deciding whether to try and sell it via traditional channels or self publish. It all has to do with whether the Writer’s Conference I want to take it to in May is going to come off or not. The info for it was supposed to be out at the beginning of February and I still haven’t heard from them. Even after repeated emails and a phone call. Sigh.
– Begin outlining Short Stories
I have been doing that and have several on standby for May Story A Day challenge. I’m thinking my goal for this challenge this year is going to be eight short stories. I managed six last year, so I think upping the total by two is pretty doable.
-Also!
I have begun revising my November 2012 NaNo story, TriPoint Station. I’m renaming it TriPoint Station: New Ship as a working title because I want to write a series about the station.
I have begun outlining the first book in the series, TriPoint Station: A New Start, in Scribophile. I just purchased Scribophile just for holding all of the information on the series. I’m still struggling with how to use it. But once I get that hurdle cleared, I won’t have to keep flipping through pages of notes and yellow stickies to find out what I called something in the previous book.
And yes, you read that right, I’ve got one month to outline A New Start because I plan on writing the 1st draft for it in the April Camp NaNo. So I get to add April Camp NaNo to April’s goals.
I also began a draft on a How To Design an ebook cover. I might as well make use of the notes I took for myself and share with everyone else. That will probably be my Vision submission for the summer. It still has a lot of bugs so I need to go through it again, making more detailed directions, for the beta test. I think I’ll get my husband to do that, muwahahahaahha.
Finally; I epublished a book, A Trio of Animal Tales. It’s out on Smashwords. My story After The Storm was rejected by Orson Scott Card’s Intergalactic Medicine Show magazine so I submitted it to Asmiov’s Science Fiction and Fantasy magazine. I probably won’t hear anything back from them until April.
May you all have a very productive March!

Flash Fiction Friday – 100 + 5 word challenge: My Third Date

100 Word Challenge: …what does it taste like…?

I first saw this over at Peter Denton’s site. Head there immediately (after reading my post, obviously.) Originally, the prompts are over at Julia’s Place, and last week’s prompt for the 100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups was:

…what does it taste like…

So here I am with a prompt and here’s the story I came up with.

My Third Date

It was my third date with this guy. I never ate anything like this.

“You’ll like it,” he said, pointing out the pepperoni and mushroom pizza.

I tried to smell it, still under the warming lights. These were fresh mushrooms, browned and shriveled looking from the oven heat. I wrinkled my nose, “Aren’t they fungus?”

“I’ll get a slice and you can try a bite or two, if you don’t like it, you can get something else.”

“What does it taste like?”

His mouth opened and his eyes rolled and shoulders shrugged, “Like mushrooms.”

So I tried it. Pepperoni and mushroom pizza is my favorite.

Goals for the Week

Goals, the things I want to get done. It’s been so hectic this week I don’t want to even look at my monthly writing goals so I’m just focusing on this week.

I am continuing to revise the work in progress (WIP) that I’m calling Recall. I had another critique come in yesterday so I have a lot of work still to do on the story.

I’m also trying to e-publish a short story. The story is done. Since I’m new to self publishing e-books and stories, I spent 4 hours yesterday following an e-pub style guide to put my story in a format that e-books can use. I’m going to have to go back to the hyperlinks I established. I don’t think they’re right. I also have to make a cover. You know, a book cover, so the story can be identified on the various e-seller sites. I’m stuck on that as I don’t seem to have the proper software for the template I have. Once that is resolved, the template will help me make a very nice cover. But that’s going to take some time, maybe the whole rest of the week.

Another writing goal is to get my Flash Fiction Friday story for this week written. Fortunately I have some outlines already finished. I just need time to sit down and focus on getting the story on paper. Some weeks I have a story already done by now but that’s not the case this week.

I’m also involved in two separate on-line writing classes, so there’s those to be done as well.

Complicating things, my mom is here for a visit (Hi, Mom!) and I want to go have some fun with her. We’re going to the Phoenix Zoo on Thursday. I’m looking forward to it, it’s a great zoo.

So, everyone hang with me. Lot’s to do and only 24 hours in a day.

Rainy Days and Mondays

Unusually for central Arizona, it’s been raining for the last two and a half days. That’s given me plenty of time to finish my revisions on my current work in progress (WIP), working title is Recall. At the moment, it’s 200 manuscript pages.

I went to the local office/mailing supply place and had a fresh copy printed off (there’s no way anyone could have read the manuscript I did my revisions on, too messy.).  Taking heart in hand, I took it to a friend, a retired editor, and handed it to her for a check. We’ll see how it goes.

Now, I can focus for a bit on getting some short stories outlined, one short story finished and self published, and a novella started on the revision path. Lots to do while the other story is with my friend.

I’m so excited.

Game of 7’s, Author Style

I was going to do something else for today’s post but this came by me this morning in one of my facebook writer groups and I thought it a great idea. The below snippet is from a novel I’m in the middle of revising and I haven’t revised that section yet so you’re getting the raw, unedited, first draft of my novel with the working title of Recall.

Who doesn’t love a Game of Sevens, author-style? Thanks for the tag, Jamie Raintree!

Go to either page 7 or 77 of your manuscript. Count down 7 lines, then copy the next 7 lines to your status. After that, invite 7 more authors to come out and play.

…face. He easily grabbed her other hand and tied it down.
He stood back, his eyes roaming over every inch of her body. She thought she would retch. Tears were running down the sides of her head, soaking the sheet under her head.
Reaching out to stroke her flat belly he said, “My, my, who knew under all those frumpy clothes you were such a firm little peach. Delicious.”

Chapter 17
The door opened and Abernathy stood there in his dockers and polo shirt, feet bare.
“Alan? Hi! It’s late, something wrong? Come in.” His friend looked surprised, then concerned.

From Working Title: Recall

If you’re an author, play along!

Flash Fiction Friday Story: The Job, A Christmas Story

I wrote another Christmas story but I haven’t been able to get it down to Flash Fiction length, under 1000 words.  So yesterday I needed an idea and just started typing ‘A dark and stormy night…’.  Amazingly the story just started flowing.  So, enjoy.

The Job, A Christmas Story

It was a dark and stormy night, snow boiling through the air, the wind whipping it in every direction.  Mike had gone to the corner store to buy some milk and bread. He felt like a failure, it’s Christmas Eve, I don’t have a gift for my wife, the last of the unemployment checks came last Friday, I don’t know what to do next.

He pulled his coat collar up around his ears, he didn’t have a hat. Ahead, he noticed a man closing up his shop, checking to make sure the door was locked. As he crossed the sidewalk to a car next to the curb, he slipped on the snowy sidewalk, falling heavily.

Mike hurried to the man, setting his plastic bag on the ground.  Kneeling on one knee beside him he asked, “You OK Mister?”

The man’s hat had come off; Mike picked it up and handed it to him, then helped him sit up.  “That was a nasty fall.  Are you alright?”

The man felt his head, “I think so, just a bump.”  He put his hat on.  Mike helped him to his feet.

“Careful now, the new snow is slippery.”

The man brushed off his pants.  “Thanks for the help.  I appreciate it.  What are you doing out on such an awful night?”

Mike picked up the bag of bread and milk.  “I went to the store; I’m on my way home.”

The man pulled his coat tighter, “walking in this weather?”

Mike switched the bag to his other hand, putting the one that had been holding the bag in his pocket.  He didn’t have gloves either. “Yeah, well, we had to sell the car. I couldn’t afford it anymore.”

He started to turn to go.

“Wait,” the man said, “I’m Harry Winston,” he nodded toward the shop, “I own this hardware store.  I’ve been looking for some help.  Are you interested?”

Mike hesitated, he wanted the work. “Mr. Winston thanks.  But I just helped you up off of the sidewalk. I don’t need any charity.”

Harry nodded.  “I appreciate that son, but really, I could use the help. I had a guy working for me just leave, joined the Army.”  He stood there, waiting for Mike’s answer.

“I’m Mike, Mike Allen.” He shuffled his feet and traded the bag to the hand that had been in his pocket.  “I won’t lie, I could use the job.”

Harry took off his glove, “Then come and see me after Christmas.  I open at seven a.m.”

Mike shook hands, face lit up.  “I’ll be there Mr. Winston.  I appreciate it.”

“Call me Harry; I’ll see you day after tomorrow, seven a.m.”

“Sure thing Harry, seven a.m.”

The End

449 Words

November 2012 National Novel Writing Month is Over!

Well, for me it is.  After a a long Thanksgiving weekend of daily word counts over what I’d been doing all month, yesterday I reached 50,347 words in my novel.  The goal is for each writer sit down and in one month, write at least 50,000 words.  This may seem like a foolish and unnecessary challenge.  Many writers think so, the thought of trying to write an entire novel in thirty days is terrifying, unnecessary, and the list goes on.

For me, this is how I started writing last year.  I was challenged, I figured out how to go about it, and I did it.  I spent January 2012 until the end of June 2012 learning how to revise a novel. And in early October 2012, I released that novel.  If you’re interested, you can find it on Amazon.com (The Bad Seed by Connie Cockrell).

I thought the whole thing was so positive, and I had such a good result that in August of 2012 I repeated the process, (project manager speak for I did it again, lol.) in what the organizers call Camp NaNo.  I finished a book that time too, which I still need to revise, probably beginning in January 2013.

This November, after plotting out my third book, I began with high hopes.  It didn’t go as well as my first two efforts.  I didn’t have enough scenes planned out to get me to my 50,000 word goal.  I did not give up.  Since my story location was on a space station (the book is tentatively titled TriPoint Station) I decided to fill out my 50,000 words (I was 15,000 words short) with short stories about life on the station.

This did two things.  It got me over the goal, making me happy.  It also allowed me to develop a good background about the station.  Things that may have been vaguely mentioned in the original story, or affected the story in some way, or had nothing to do with the original story but helped me develop a better idea of the station’s culture, legal system, economic reality, and so on.  I found this very helpful.

It pointed out flaws in my original story’s physical layout, naming conventions, it helped me develop a slang for the station and put in place a cultural bias, such as, names of the working class tend to remain Irish based (I had the station settled by Irish originally) while the rich tended to more New Age type names.

While I liked my original idea, I really liked getting into the nuts and bolts of my station.  I even added aliens, which I hadn’t even thought about in the original story.  So, that’s it.  I’ll have a lot of work to do to revise what I wrote in November.  There are a lot of continuity issues I’ll have to resolve along with adding an additional level of conflict.  That’s OK.  When I’m done, sometime around next June or July, I’ll start sending it out to SciFi publishers.

I can hardly wait.

National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo or NaNo for short)

Last November, 2011, I entered a challenge, to write 50,000 words of a novel in just 30 days.  The 30 days of November.  It turns out, even though I’d never heard of it until just two weeks before November 1st, that several tens of thousands of people had heard of it.  Not just heard of it but participated.

I’d dabbled, of course, who hasn’t.  But seriously, I never got more than a chapter or so.  I just had no clue how to go about it.  My daughter, the one who challenged me, by the way to enter this challenge, had a book on a way to write a novel.  I read the thing in just a couple of days and given my understanding of it, planned out my novel.

I’d always heard that you should write what you know.  I did, in a way.  I wrote about a segment of our society that really bugged me, the serious take over of our food by mega corporations.  I ‘won’ the challenge.  That is, I wrote over 60,000 words by the end of November.  I got a prize.  If I could get the novel revised by the end of June 2012, I could get 5 free copies of it.

Hoo!  My next step was how to revise a novel.  That’s another post.  Let it suffice to say that I was hooked.  I had a path, I had developed resources and contacts.  I had an avenue of expression that I never had access to before.  I haven’t stopped since.

So, if you’re thinking of writing a book.  Look around.  There are books and other resources out there that will tell you how to go about it.  Find the one method that works for you and write what you’re passionate about.  I’ve over 55, it’s never too late.