Last December I did a writing exercise where I was not to say who was doing the talking, in other words, write a short story with no dialog tags, or other ‘stage’ direction. I thought it came out pretty well but in the interest of easier reading, I’ve added dialog tags and other emotional direction.
Where Do Babies Come From
I was dashing around the kitchen in the usual after work way getting chicken ready for dinner when my daughter, Brittany, looked up from her coloring book at the kitchen table. “Amanda says babies come from mommy’s tummy’s. Is that true?”
The plate of chicken nearly slipped out of my hands. Amanda is a cute little girl but her parents keep her a little too well informed. I swallowed. “Well, that is true.”
Her favorite red-orange crayon hovered over the coloring book page. “How do they get in a mommy’s tummy?”
Now? I’m having this conversation now with a seven year old? I glanced at the clock; my husband wasn’t going to be home for at least another half hour. “Well. Um, first; mommy’s and daddy’s fall in love.”
Her grey-blue eyes drilled into me. “And then they get a baby?”
I started to sweat. “No, not exactly.” I put the plate of chicken thighs down, washed my hands then walked over to the table. “Mommy’s and Daddy’s love each other. Then, when they think the time is right, when they have a lot of love, so much love that they have extra, then they make a baby.”
She nodded, her little face clearly rolling that information around in her head. “Do they use modeling clay? We made little people in art class out of modeling clay.”
“Noooo, not exactly.” Under my breath I muttered, “I should have bought that, How a Baby is Born, book.”
“What? You need a book to make babies?”
Why can she hear that and not hear me when I tell her it’s time for bed? “Uh, yes. I can show you pictures. How’s that? I’ll get a book that tells you all about how babies are born.”
She shrugged. “OK. Can I have a cookie?”
The End
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LOL – haven’t we parents all been there, sweated that question 🙂
Indeed we have. Thanks for the stop by.