It’s been a crazy 5 weeks but a lot of fun to try and match voice and tone of previous writers for each story. Today is the last day of the challenge. I’ve picked a story to finish that has been titled, The Green Road. Part One was Snellopy, Part Two was David Kearney, Part Three was Doreen Queen, and Part Four was Samantha Dunaway Bryant. Final part is by me.
I’ll make an effort to track down all of the stories I participated in so you can see how they turned out. They may end up being special posts. I’ll see what I can do. On to The Green Road.
http://snellopy.blogspot.com.au/2013/11/the-forest-road.html
“Blades out lads it’ll be wet work with this lot, no doubt about that.” Some faces showed smiles, others grimaced but nowhere was fear to be seen. Eagerly they watched the carriage as it moved unsuspectingly into their ambush.
An arrow thunked into the throat of the coachman and the band flung themselves at the road with an animalistic scream. The horses, rearing in fright had their throats slashed – although they were valuable beasts, it would be too long before they could sell them and make a profit. Flintlocks poked through the windows and a few ineffective shots did little more than fill the carriage with smoke before they were torn from their owner’s hands. The door was wrenched from the hinges and the attackers leaned in, keen to ascertain the nature of their spoils.
“God’s teeth!” swore the leader, and he reeled back in shock, for one of the passengers was not human. Large yellow eyes nictitating wildly in the sudden clamour stared back at them from the being trussed up on the floor of the carriage. Green, scaly skin covered its hide, and the other passengers were torn between watching their charge and dealing with the bandits that now milled in confusion on the road.
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http://scenesandsequels.wordpress.com/2013/12/04/flash-fiction-challenge-part-2-the-next-200-words/
A blood-curdling screech filled the air.
The leader, Marin, rolled clear of the carriage an instant before a jet of flame engulfed two of his dumbfounded companions and set the carriage on fire. “They’re transporting a dragon!”
Two soldiers burst from the burning carriage, Flintlocks in hand, and opened fire at their scattering foes. Another bandit fell before the pair discarded their spent pistols and reached for the rapiers at their side.
Marin sprang into action, running the first soldier through before he could unsheathe his sword. “Stand your ground lads,” he said. “Surround the wagon.” The second soldier lunged at the bandit leader, who deftly parried the attack then plunged his blade through the soldier’s heart.
As the remaining bandits took up positions around their prize, the air shimmered and became deathly cold. When the flames vanished, the men shifted nervously, looking at Marin with wide eyes. He knew what securing a dragon would mean for his small band. He also knew that the spoils of battle weren’t worth having unless they could be enjoyed. But what he didn’t know was whether his rag tag company could survive a battle with the magician inside the smouldering carriage.
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http://dragonfyreediting.blogspot.com/2013/12/the-forest-road.html
A petite red-head dressed in a green pelisse delicately stepped out of the carriage. Once she stood, she brushed down her jade satin skirts, settled her hands on her hips, and surveyed the band with bright yellow eyes. She grinned up at Marin. “Thanks much, mates. I was growing tired of the accommodations.”
Marin swallowed heavily. “Milday, you are now our prisoner. Come forth and we’ll treat you with all respect. Otherwise, we’ll cut you down where you stand.”
“Really, heavy-handed threats? I expected more from a group of brigands such as yourselves. How on earth will you hold me? I could transform and wipe you out with a single breath.” She picked her way forward around the bodies of the two dead guards. “However, I should be grateful. You freed me from the King’s men. How best can I reward you?” She tapped her chin with a forefinger. “How best, indeed?”
His men looked at him and back at the magician, for a magician she had to be. No one had ever heard of a female magician, let alone one who could transform. Marin knew he needed to take control of the situation before he lost his men.
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Part Four: Samantha Dunaway Bryant
http://samanthadunawaybryant.blogspot.com/2013/12/connect-4-writers-flash-fiction.html
Quickly he sheathed his sword, and stepped towards the magician, one hand gliding into his pocket. She cocked her head at him curiously, in a gesture that was eerily like a bird of prey. Trying to look confident, he wrapped his hand around the small stone he had stolen from the old woman in the woods, praying that it was all it promised to be. The stone seemed to warm in the center of his palm, and he grinned lecherously at the woman.
Pulling her into his arms, he kissed her. As he did, a pulse of energy shot from the stone up his arm and through his mouth into hers. She stiffened, pushing against him for a moment, then went soft. When he let her go, she stood there, looking dazed and fragile. Her eyes had turned brown. The stone had done its work. It wouldn’t hold her forever, but it would give him the time he needed to come up with another plan.
He turned back to the stunned circle of his men, all staring slack-jawed at the dragon-woman-magician who had seemingly been tamed by their captain’s kiss. He tossed back his head and laughed.
“Yes, that will do nicely for my reward,” said Marin.
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Forest Road Part 5 Connie Cockrell
Marin and the band mounted up, the now docile magician on his horse behind him. He needed to talk to the woman.
The band rode toward their cave hide out. Marin took his opportunity. “Do you know who you are?”
“Lisel Donnough. The magician took over my body two years ago. Can you help me?”
“I don’t know. The spell I used won’t hold the magician long. Can you tell me anything I can use?”
“I know she’s afraid of mirrors. She complains all the time about having a beautiful face but is unable to gaze upon it.”
“Hmm.” Marin called to his men. “Change of plans. We go to High Gate!” He wheeled his horse around.
Half a day later he’d made a deal with the resident wizard. Lisel was put in the center of a ring of mirrors with a hooded ancient crone, bound with ropes, in the ring with her. As soon as the rock spell wore off, the girl began to scream. Her form mutated from green scales to young woman randomly and rapidly. The mirrors were too much. The spirit of the magician escaped to the crone.
Marin received his gold, and the girl.
The End