Flash Fiction Friday: A Tale of the City – A Christmas Story

I thought about all of the Christmas stories I’ve read over the years, some silly, sappy, some dark and serious. This one is serious but has a happy ending. I always want a Christmas story to have a happy ending.

A Tale of the City – A Christmas Story

Amanda stepped slowly along the broken sidewalk pulling her two wheeled shopping cart over a piece of concrete; her hands and arms weren’t as strong as they used to be.

She turned as she heard them coming along the sidewalk behind her; four black boys; laughing as they pushed and shoved each other back and forth across the sidewalk. She judged their ages at about thirteen, old enough to cause trouble. Pulling the cart over the next broken bit of concrete she moved to the side of the building, I’ll wait till they pass by.

The biggest boy spied her next to the building. Slapping the boy next to him, “Hey Granny, what’cho doin’ in this neighborhood?

Another picked up the cue, “Yeah Granny, dis no place for old white women,” they laughed as they surrounded her.

The big boy kicked the tire of her cart, “Got anything good in there Granny?”

Warily she pulled the cart closer, “Nothing boys would like.” In the old days the shop keeper would have been out on the sidewalk by now, telling them to move along, but this store had been boarded up for the last ten years.

One boy grabbed the cart basket, ripping the handle from her grasp. “Let’s see Granny,” he pulled cans and boxes out of the bag in the cart, tossing them to his friends. “Shiiit, Granny, nothin’ in here but old white lady food.” His friends tossed the cans of food back and forth, laughing.

“Hey, dog food!” he pulled the last can from the bag. “You eat dog food Granny?” she recoiled as he waved the can in her face. The boys kicked a paper wrapped packet of chicken thighs, splitting it open onto the sidewalk. Cans and boxes smashed on the edge of the curb; soup, milk, noodles and oatmeal mixed in the gutter, cranberries rolled in all directions.  Her oranges were thrown against the crumbling brick wall; a sickening splat as they broke open, the smell of orange overpowering the smell soup in the gutter.  Tears began to run down her cheeks.

The smallest boy climbed into the cart, “give me a ride!” The biggest boy yanked the handle and pulled him along, breaking the bottom out of the cart as he hauled it over the rough sidewalk, spilling his friend into a tangle with the broken and twisted cart.

“Too bad, so sad,” the boy laughed as he tossed the cart into the gutter.  They moved off, “Go eat dog food, Granny!” he called over his shoulder, his friends giving him a high five. One boy looked back; then turned to join his friends. She looked at the sidewalk around her; groceries scattered over the sidewalk and into the gutter.

Pulling a tissue from her pocket, she wiped her eyes and blew her nose. Her purse lay against the building, at least they didn’t take my purse.

At her apartment building she struggled up to the second floor, pulling keys out of her coat pocket. “Sandy, I’m home.” Sandy eased off of the sofa; an old dog, the little terrier mix didn’t move as fast as he used to either.  He came over to her as she shut and chained the door, tail wagging.  She leaned down to scratch him behind his ears.

She took her hat and coat off and put them on the pegs by the door, “it’s going to be a skimpy Christmas dinner tomorrow Sandy.  Bad boys spoiled all the food,” she walked over to the sofa and sat down, Sandy jumping into her lap.  She looked the little dog in the eyes, fondling his ears.  “I’ll have to share my dinner with you.” She gave him a kiss on the head and he lay down in her lap. She stroked the dog’s back.

“Not like the old days Sandy. All the stores along the block were open. We knew everyone in the neighborhood. Boys wouldn’t have dreamed of attacking an old woman. Now,” her tears started again, “now, even the church is closed.  I’m the only one left.” Sandy looked up at her, so she scratched him under the chin. He tucked his nose under his paws in her lap.  She sat like that until the sun went down.

The next day after breakfast, she sat on the sofa, where the light was best. She read the Christmas story out of the bible to Sandy, who had come to sit beside her, his head on her lap. She finished, sighing; she missed going to Christmas services.  Sandy’s head shot up at a knock on the door. “Strange,” she told the dog. “No one ever visits.”

Amanda levered herself off the sofa. At the door, through the peep hole; there was a black woman.  She looked harmless enough. Amanda opened the door.

“Hello?” Amanda looked at the woman, who was carrying a paper grocery bag. A boy, also holding a paper bag, stood beside her. “Can I help you?”

The black woman shook her head, “No ma’am, but I think I can help you.  I’m Latisha Evans and this is my son, Lamar.”  She looked around at her son, “Go ahead boy.”

The boy stepped forward, “Ma’am, I was one of the boys yesterday that spoiled your food and shopping cart.  I’m sorry; I’ve bought you some more groceries.” He looked at his mother, “Out of my own money.” He held out the bag, but Amanda was too surprised to take it. She looked at Latisha.

“Ma’am, I raised my son better than that. I really wish you’d take the groceries as our apology.”  Amanda smiled.  “Thank you, would you like to come in for some tea?”  She opened the door wider.

Latisha looked at her son, “Yes ma’am; that would be nice.”

The End

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Merry-Go-Round Blog Tour December 2012 – My Favorite Books for the Year

This month the discussion is on my favorite book or books of the year.  This last spring I was taking a course on How to Revise Your Novel (by Holly Lisle) and during one lesson she recommended a book by George R.R. Martin, The Game of Thrones. (Yes, the one that’s now an HBO series.)

I’ve been reading Science Fiction since I was twelve and for some reason, I’d never come across one of his novels.  So I get the book from the library and I was blown away.  He tells the story from the point of view of different people, each chapter from a different point of view.  This is a pretty unique way to write a story and is quite effective for this series.

What I like is that you see the same event from different perspectives and the characters have different opinions, depending on what they’re plans are, on how the event affects them.

I’m now on the fifth book of the series and all of the threads of the story are beginning to come together.  I can hardly wait to see how Mr. Martin resolves all of the differing plot lines.  If you haven’t had a chance to read this series, I recommend it.  But reader beware, there is a lot of violence in the books.

Happy Reading!

If you want to get to read about nearly twenty other writers, check out the Merry-Go-Round Blog Tour.  http://merrygoroundtour.blogspot.com/  The next post is on the 19th by Jean Scharra

November 2012 National Novel Writing Month is Over!

Well, for me it is.  After a a long Thanksgiving weekend of daily word counts over what I’d been doing all month, yesterday I reached 50,347 words in my novel.  The goal is for each writer sit down and in one month, write at least 50,000 words.  This may seem like a foolish and unnecessary challenge.  Many writers think so, the thought of trying to write an entire novel in thirty days is terrifying, unnecessary, and the list goes on.

For me, this is how I started writing last year.  I was challenged, I figured out how to go about it, and I did it.  I spent January 2012 until the end of June 2012 learning how to revise a novel. And in early October 2012, I released that novel.  If you’re interested, you can find it on Amazon.com (The Bad Seed by Connie Cockrell).

I thought the whole thing was so positive, and I had such a good result that in August of 2012 I repeated the process, (project manager speak for I did it again, lol.) in what the organizers call Camp NaNo.  I finished a book that time too, which I still need to revise, probably beginning in January 2013.

This November, after plotting out my third book, I began with high hopes.  It didn’t go as well as my first two efforts.  I didn’t have enough scenes planned out to get me to my 50,000 word goal.  I did not give up.  Since my story location was on a space station (the book is tentatively titled TriPoint Station) I decided to fill out my 50,000 words (I was 15,000 words short) with short stories about life on the station.

This did two things.  It got me over the goal, making me happy.  It also allowed me to develop a good background about the station.  Things that may have been vaguely mentioned in the original story, or affected the story in some way, or had nothing to do with the original story but helped me develop a better idea of the station’s culture, legal system, economic reality, and so on.  I found this very helpful.

It pointed out flaws in my original story’s physical layout, naming conventions, it helped me develop a slang for the station and put in place a cultural bias, such as, names of the working class tend to remain Irish based (I had the station settled by Irish originally) while the rich tended to more New Age type names.

While I liked my original idea, I really liked getting into the nuts and bolts of my station.  I even added aliens, which I hadn’t even thought about in the original story.  So, that’s it.  I’ll have a lot of work to do to revise what I wrote in November.  There are a lot of continuity issues I’ll have to resolve along with adding an additional level of conflict.  That’s OK.  When I’m done, sometime around next June or July, I’ll start sending it out to SciFi publishers.

I can hardly wait.

No Flash Fiction Friday Yesterday

Sorry about no Flash Fiction Friday.  I’m neck deep in the last week of the National Novel Writing Month and to be honest, it’s not going well.  The novel I planned didn’t last the whole 50,000 words required to “win” the November challenge so now I’m writing by the seat of my pants (writers call that pantsing) trying to come up with additional stories on the spur of the moment.

Since my story, TriPoint Station, is set on a space station, I decided to write some short stories, exploring different aspects of the station.  I’ve managed two short stories so far bringing me up to just a little over 5,000 words to go to finish the November challenge.  I’ll keep plugging.

In the meantime, here’s a snippet from TriPoint Station.  Be aware, this is a very rough draft.  It may not even make the final book or it may be changed dramatically.

Snippet from TriPoint Station

“Lass!  Welcome back.”  He hustled out from behind the bar and gave me a bear hug.  He did a double take when he saw my face, then pulled me over to an empty table, pulling out the chair for me.  I sat down and he sat down with me.  Quietly, he asked, “What happened?”

I shut my eyes; the memory of Mike, lying sprawled out on the concourse deck, blood seeping out from under his back flashing in my mind.  I sighed and opened my eyes.  “The guy I left here with, Mike, was just killed.  Knifed right in front of me.”

Shamus’ eyes went wide.  “How?”

I shook my head.  “Three big guys attacked us as we were walking along the concourse, going to get some dinner.  I don’t understand it.  One grabbed my arm, Mike dropped back, taking on the other two.  It went horribly wrong and one of them knifed him in the back.”  I clasped my hands on the table to stop them from shaking.

Shamus put his hands over mine.  They covered my hands completely, rough hands but warm and gentle.  I looked into his face, there was concern there.  “He was trying to defend me Shamus.” Tears started to leak down my cheeks.

End Snippet

I hope it’s teased your appetite for the rest of the book.

Merry Go Round Blog Tour – My take on the state of Publishing

This is my first post for the Merry-Go-Round blog tour.  I’m quite excited about being part of this process.  This month the discussion is on the state of Publishing.  Since I’m a new writer, only a year since I started, I wasn’t sure where to begin.  As a matter of fact, I’ve been pondering what to write about, given my lack of experience.

I have published a book, The Bad Seed, available on Amazon.com.  I used CreateSpace to publish it and Amazon.com is selling it.  This is an independent or indie self publishing path.  I haven’t had many sales yet but I’m not exactly a big name either.

All I do know is that it’s confusing.  The whole process is intimidating, at least to me, especially the traditional publishing route.  However, I’ve promised myself that I’m going to give it a shot come the New Year.  I’m trying to get a backlog of stories done so that at least once per month I can submit a story somewhere.  I even bought the 2012 Writer’s Market, Deluxe Edition book to help me figure out where to send my stories.

So, the state of publishing?  Confusing, but I’m going to give it a try anyway.  If you’re new to writing, all I can say is don’t be afraid.  Send one of your stories out there and keep doing it until you succeed in getting published.

National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo or NaNo for short)

Last November, 2011, I entered a challenge, to write 50,000 words of a novel in just 30 days.  The 30 days of November.  It turns out, even though I’d never heard of it until just two weeks before November 1st, that several tens of thousands of people had heard of it.  Not just heard of it but participated.

I’d dabbled, of course, who hasn’t.  But seriously, I never got more than a chapter or so.  I just had no clue how to go about it.  My daughter, the one who challenged me, by the way to enter this challenge, had a book on a way to write a novel.  I read the thing in just a couple of days and given my understanding of it, planned out my novel.

I’d always heard that you should write what you know.  I did, in a way.  I wrote about a segment of our society that really bugged me, the serious take over of our food by mega corporations.  I ‘won’ the challenge.  That is, I wrote over 60,000 words by the end of November.  I got a prize.  If I could get the novel revised by the end of June 2012, I could get 5 free copies of it.

Hoo!  My next step was how to revise a novel.  That’s another post.  Let it suffice to say that I was hooked.  I had a path, I had developed resources and contacts.  I had an avenue of expression that I never had access to before.  I haven’t stopped since.

So, if you’re thinking of writing a book.  Look around.  There are books and other resources out there that will tell you how to go about it.  Find the one method that works for you and write what you’re passionate about.  I’ve over 55, it’s never too late.

New Content

I’m adding some content, if you’ve noticed. I have two RSS Feeds to two other blogs I really enjoy to the right of the main page. I’m still working out the difference between an rss feed and a link. So far, I haven’t been able to get the link to show up on the page.

It will all come with time. Meanwhile, take a look at these other blogs and enjoy.

Read a Banned Book

I’ve become aware it’s Banned Books week.  It’s an effort to make us all aware that books are still being banned from not only school libraries, but libraries in general.

As an avid reader I find the thought of books being banned repugnant.  Who are these people who want to tell me what I can or cannot read?  How do they know a story isn’t appropriate for me?  (I first read Gone With The Wind when I was in the 6th grade!)

Historic books, like Tom Sawyer, Huckleberry Finn and so on have been known about for a long time.  New books, like the Hunger Games and Harry Potter have drawn a huge amount of vitriol from those who fear that we’ll all turn into Satanists if we read  them.

What those people miss, as with Hunger Games or Huckleberry Finn, is the opportunity to talk about the circumstances that make those stories so gripping.  How is that society constructed and what is the thought process involved?  How does that story compare to our current society?  In the case of Hunger Games, could something like that actually occur?  What would have to happen to allow our society to morph into that one?

So, do yourself a favor this week, read a banned book.

Backpacking

My backpacking trip has finally come together, one more person signed on so now we have 3 going.

As backpacking trips go, this one is luxurious.  We have someone meeting us at the end of every trail day to deliver water.  What a treat!  They also bring whatever we want for luxuries for the night.  Beer, wine, chocolate, fire wood for a campfire.  Living the life!

I’m excited.  But, I have to miss this weeks Flash Fiction Friday.  I hope you all excuse me from that.

 

zette’s Day!

The owner and host of my favorite on-line writing page is Lazette Gifford.  She owns the Forward Motion site and manages both it and her writing and her photography and her publishing, etc., you get the picture.

What I’m here to say today is that without charging anyone a cent, she keeps that site going and provides so many tools to use to make my writing better that it’s like a college in itself.

Besides herself, a great many other wonderful authors make their home there and make every new person feel welcome.

So here’s to zette, may her day be perfect!