Flash Fiction Friday: Rescuing the Children

I was toying with this story idea and really want to expand the story. Here’s a flash version for now.

Rescuing The Children

Wilton handed the reins to his wife, Ruth. “You understand the plan?”
She nodded, “You’re going to break into the mage’s temple, get Helen and Jimmy and get out. I’ll drive around to the other side of town and meet you.”
Wilton rubbed his temple. “I’m sorry I ever decided to come into this forsaken town.”
She rubbed his back. “We didn’t know the mages here wanted young teens for their dark magic. Are you sure you don’t want me to add my power to yours?”
Wilton sighed. “I am. Black magic can blow back. I don’t want you soiled by it.”
He reached to wipe a tear from her cheek. “Wait for us as long as you can, but if there’s a problem,” his hand squeezed hers, “run the wagon out of town.”
Ruth started to protest then nodded. “Go get our children.”
Wilton jumped from the wagon, disappearing into the shadows of the street leading to the Mage Temple. She flicked the reins and headed to the meeting place.
At the temple, the only stone structure in town, there were no visible guards. “Warded,” he thought. He shielded himself then felt out the wards, one at each corner of the building. He applied pressure and felt the nearest ward break. He wiped the sweat from his forehead. He hurried across the street. He wondered about the ease with which he broke that ward. He hoped it was a measure of the town’s mages, and not a trap.
If the temple was a standard design, the mages would need a basement room, a space with bare earth as the floor. The nearest basement window had a light ward on it which he dispelled before it could scream. The lack of response worried him. Two broken wards should have alerted someone by now.
He slid through the window, crouching against the wall, listening. They could be distracted by a ceremony, he thought. He pushed the worry away. He produced just enough blue light to see the door on the opposite wall. Once there, he tried the latch, it wasn’t locked. Letting the glow subside, he opened the door a crack. The hallway was dark, so he slipped through, creeping along the wall to his left. He wondered if the dark temple might be set up in a counterclockwise pattern. He hoped going left wasn’t a mistake.
The hallway turned right. After a few steps a light showed ahead. There were voices chanting and the light grew. Wilton shrank into a doorway on the left wall. A procession appeared. Two acolyte torchbearers were in front, turning left. Two mages followed and his heart stopped. There were Helen and Jimmy, dressed in black sacrificial robes followed by two more torch bearing acolytes. The chief mage, alone behind the acolytes, was followed by three more mages.
When the procession turned the corner, Wilton leapt out of hiding and snapped the last mage’s neck, guiding him to the floor without a sound. He followed the procession into the ceremonial chamber and as the mages and acolytes moved around the central sacrificial pit, he blasted a wave of magic around the room, knocking the acolytes out and stunning the rest.
Wilton shot a healing wave to his children, who began to get up. The quickly recovering Chief pointed his staff at Wilton, shouting words of power. Wilton brushed the blaze of sickly green magic away, burning his hand in the process. He shouted to Helen and Jimmy, “Get up, get out the door, go left and wait for me!”
Helen wiped her eyes, grabbed her little brother by the arm, dragging him to his feet and ran to the door. The Chief sent ball after ball of the sick, green power toward Wilton as he backed toward the door. He grunted with the effort of holding the shield he’d put between the children and the Chief Mage. The other mages began stirring, he needed to move quickly. He pulled magic through the earthen floor and hurled it at the ceiling. It began collapsing on the mages as Wilton dashed into the hall.
Helen and Jimmy waited at the door the procession came through, Jimmy leaning against the wall. Wilton could hear the mages behind him, some screaming for help. The Chief was organizing them quickly.
“Hurry!” Herding his children through the door, closing it behind him, and up the stairs, he pulsed power at the lower doorway. Stones fell from the ceiling against the door.
“That won’t hold them long,” he pushed the children up the rest of the stairway. “Let’s go.”
Helen pulled the still unsteady Jimmy. Wilton tried to watch ahead and behind. The stairway ended in a hall, the main door in front of them. Helen opened it and a ward shrieked. She pulled her brother through and ran down the front steps. “Dad, which way?” she screamed.
“Right,” he pointed. He set a ward on the front door. It wouldn’t hold long. He ran after them. “Go!” he shouted, “Straight through town.”
They ran the few blocks to the edge of town. Helen shouted, out of breath, “Dad, I can see Mom!”
He looked ahead, a shimmer of green was between Ruth and him, “Stop! Helen, stop!”
She grabbed Jimmy’s arm and slid to a stop, dust from the street filming the green barrier. Ruth was on the other side, eyes closed and chanting softly. Wilton skidded to a stop next to the children. While she worked to open the ward, he turned to watch the street. He saw the mages coming just as he heard his wife sigh.
“Children, get on the wagon. Wilton, let’s go.”
He sprinted to the wagon seat. Ruth was already there. He slapped the reins, “Hi, hup, hup!” The horses began to run, Ruth watched behind. Behind the driver’s seat, the children were holding tight as the wagon bounced over the ruts in the road. She turned to them, “We’re away.”

The End
996 Words
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Merry-Go-Round-Tour for February 18th, 2013

Firsts; what image does that bring up for you? Your first kiss, first car, first love, first paycheck, first child or if you’re a writer, first story, first book, first royalty check?

A life is so full of firsts. It’s hard to pick just one out of so many. I married at 18 and I’m still on that first marriage. In a culture of throw away things, I guess that’s pretty remarkable. Next month it will be thirty-eight years. Nothing throw away about that.

My first paycheck, not counting working as a babysitter for my mom and other families, was from the Johnstown Knitting Mill when I was sixteen. The place made shirts; tee shirts, reversible football jerseys, even men’s boxers. A good deal of that stuff was made from polyester, including the boxers. My summer job was to turn the reversible football jerseys right side out. They brought me to my station, a table in a corner between two big windows. A good spot actually, because the windows opened and I could get a cross breeze in the over-heated, huge sewing room. Dozens of women, my mom included, sat in front of sewing machines in long rows, sewing sleeves on shirts, hemming them and tossing the bundles of a dozen into bins which young men wheeled away to, somewhere. My job was to take the bundles of jerseys, turn each shirt right side out, re-bundle them and toss them into a bin. The entire length of the wall, the entire room’s length, 100 feet or more, was piled six feet high with these bundles. It took me all summer to turn all of those bundles. The first two weeks I was there I got up, went to work and when I got home went right to bed. I felt like I really earned that paycheck.

Writing is sometimes like that, a piecework job, sit down, do the work and hope you’ve produced enough words to get paid. So far, I haven’t produced enough to get paid but I’m still working on it. Unlike factory work, I like writing. I like getting into my head and turning random ideas into another world. So, one of these days, I’ll get my first royalty check. Won’t that be a good first!

The Merry-Go-Round Blog Tour is sponsored by the website Forward Motion (http://www.fmwriters.com) . The tour is you, the reader, travelling the world from author’s blog to author’s blog. There are all sorts of writers at all stages in their writing career, so there’s always something new and different to enjoy. If you want to get to know the nearly twenty other writers check out the rest of the tour at http://merrygoroundtour.blogspot.com!  Up next: Jean Schara!

Flash Fiction Friday – Fly By

I was intrigued with the story of an asteroid flying by the Earth today. This is the result.

Fly By

Jean Nichols, blogger for What’s Up!, hung up the phone. She scowled at her computer monitor. Something was wrong. Communications had been intermittent since the asteroid called DA14 was announced.

Jean’s friend, Pete Willis, an astronomer at the Lowell Observatory, Discovery Channel Telescope near Flagstaff, Arizona, told her the asteroid was going to be a near miss; inside the orbit of several communications satellites, as a matter of fact. Despite the assurances of the government on every major TV news outlet, she was already having trouble with her computer and her television reception. Even now, her computer monitor had gone all fuzzy again, static coming through the speakers.

She tapped her pencil on the notebook in her lap, biting her lip. If only, Pete, was nearby; she could go over and see what was going on. She pulled her rolodex out and started flipping through it. Who did she know nearby, or even two or three hours away from her Glen Burnie, Maryland, home? She stopped on a card, an old college friend, Kim Anderson. She was working at a research facility just over the Maryland line in Virginia. Electronics and communications research, she’d be perfect. Jean called her to set up an appointment for later today. The reception was terrible.

At 6pm Jean was waiting for Kim at a Macaroni Grill, not far from the facility where Kim worked. Jean stood as Kim approached and the old college friends hugged before they sat down. “Jean, it was so nice to hear from you this morning,” Kim unfolded her napkin and put it in her lap.

“I’m blogging a story about the asteroid. I thought you’d be able to give me some information,” Jean took a sip of the water she had the waiter pour while she waited.  “What’s the scoop from your point of view?”

They their conversation paused while they ordered. After the waiter left, Kim lowered her voice, leaning over the table. “Well it’s causing havoc, that’s for sure.”

Jean put her notebook on the table, pen in hand. “But the talking heads on TV are all saying the asteroid won’t be any danger. The thing is close, but will fly by India and back out into space.”

Kim was shaking her head. “I know that’s what they’re saying, and maybe it will. But in the meantime, whatever the thing is made of is affecting everything in the shop. If it’s electronic, it’s affected.”

The waiter brought two glasses of wine. “Your entrée’s will be out shortly ladies.”

Jean picked up her glass, “Thank you.”

When he left, she asked her old friend, “Any idea what’s causing it?”

Kim shrugged, picking up her wine glass. “No idea, lots of guesses though; everything from new elements to little green men. The government has a request out to everyone to find out what the issue is and provide a solution.”

Jean took a note; then asked, “Do you have government access to asteroid video?”

“We do; a feed straight from JPL and NASA.”

Grinning, Jean asked, “Do you think you could get me in to see, after supper?”

Kim knotted her forehead then shrugged, “Why not. The company has all kinds of people in and out at all hours. Sure, I’ll sign you in.”

After dinner Jean followed Kim to her company parking lot. As promised, Kim had no trouble signing her into the building. They went to the lab where Kim worked and found two guys there, working on diminishing the impact of the electronic interference. The JPL feed was on a 36 inch flat screen at the end of the lab.

Kim introduced Jean to Wayne and Ani, and walked her over to the JPL feed.

“Wow, the tracking data direct. How is the signal so clean?”

Wayne spoke up, “Shielded cable.” He motioned at a monitor on his workbench. “This is the local cable channel feed, it’s a mess.”

Jean could see that the signal was so bad she could barely make out the news reader’s face. “There’s no sound?”

Wayne reached over to the remote and unmuted the sound, nothing but static. He turned it back down. “I had to mute it. I couldn’t stand the noise anymore.”

Jean looked back to the big screen, “When’s the asteroid supposed to pass by?”

Kim looked at her watch, about ten minutes from now. They stood watching the JPL feed of a simulated asteroid passing by the earth. An inset showed the actual tracking on radar. At about five minutes until it was supposed to pass by, the tracking screen took over the whole picture. The asteroid had stopped.  All four men stopped what they were doing and came over to the screen. “What the hell,” Wayne offered. The rest of them just stared at the screen.

Kim turned up the sound. A JPL spokesperson came on, telling the audience that they didn’t know what was happening, but from the tracking data, the asteroid had indeed stopped its’ fly by and appeared to have parked in orbit around the earth.

Looking at the small group around her, she saw Kim chewing on a nail. Wayne said, “Crap!” and ran over to his bench. He grabbed the remote, unmuting the sound. “Guys, look at this!”

The cable feed had cleared and the screen showed a face, but nothing they had ever seen before. “Greetings, people of Earth. We are from Ceti, you will comply with our demands.”

Wayne took a step toward the monitor, face pale. “That’s what we get for sending calls out into space.”

The End

928 Words

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A Wonderful Surprise

I was searching for some information on the internet the other day and happened across Mohandas Gandi’s Seven Social Sins. After I read them I was struck by how totally appropriate they are for our current social/cultural/political world situation.

So I’m posting them here, as food for thought by all of us.

Seven Social Sins

Politics without Principles

Wealth without Work

Pleasure without Conscience

Knowledge without Character

Commerce without Morality

Science without Humanity

Worship without Sacrifice

from Young India (22 Oct 1925) Collected works of Mahatma Gandi Vol. 33 (PDF) p. 133

Rainy Days and Mondays

Unusually for central Arizona, it’s been raining for the last two and a half days. That’s given me plenty of time to finish my revisions on my current work in progress (WIP), working title is Recall. At the moment, it’s 200 manuscript pages.

I went to the local office/mailing supply place and had a fresh copy printed off (there’s no way anyone could have read the manuscript I did my revisions on, too messy.).  Taking heart in hand, I took it to a friend, a retired editor, and handed it to her for a check. We’ll see how it goes.

Now, I can focus for a bit on getting some short stories outlined, one short story finished and self published, and a novella started on the revision path. Lots to do while the other story is with my friend.

I’m so excited.

Plug for My Friend Jaime

My friend Jaime Raintree is posting a web story on her site, a chapter a week. It can also be reached through her FaceBook fan page. An author of Women’s Fiction, this is an excellent story and I hope you all can find the time each week to enjoy it each week. Even better, if you join her Fan Page on FaceBook, you’ll get a notification of each publication.

Here’s the links: https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=460653713984532&set=a.432839213432649.90830.397495956966975&type=1

Holiday Monday

It’s Martin Luther King Jr. Day and Inauguration Day. I just heard a little of President Obama’s speech on TV while moving furniture around my living room in anticipation of my mom’s arrival for a two month visit on Wednesday.

Since I don’t work, at a regular job that is, anymore, holidays like this don’t mean a whole lot to me. But it does mean my daughter has a day off and it’s nice to have her around the house to chat with. 

Other than that, it’s a pretty regular day. I got up, today was my turn to lead the local walking group for an hour walk around the neighborhood. Like I said, we moved furniture around so my mom will have a place to sit during her stay here. I’ll work on my revision some more, maybe outline a short or flash fiction story, call my mom, whatever. 

You can see, I don’t have a very exciting life, lol! But that’s OK with me. So, I’m off to contact someone who was going to help me with a posting problem but the problem went away all by itself. I need to thank him anyway.

You all have a great holiday!

Book Review – The Tokaido Road

I just finished a lovely book by Lucia St. Clair Robsen called The Tokaido Road. It was recommended to my husband by his brother. My husband found it in the local library and liked it so much he read it quickly and passed it to me.

A story about a young samaurai woman, determined to avenger her father’s death, it takes us through 1700’s Japan. I loved the realistic depiction of Japanese culture, fashion, hair do’s and language. The book is based on an actual historical event in Japanese history and brings us along on the young woman’s journey.

If you love a good action story, love the feel of a lush and rich story world, you’ll love this biik. There are swords, danger, chases, and love. I recommend it highly.

End of 2012

It’s the end of the year and that always makes me a little depressed. I call it the end of the year blues.

I look back and think about what I’ve actually accomplished. Am I really living? Could I have done anything differently? 

I think it’s just the short days, that make me depressed. After all, I’ve taken several writing classes, published my first book, traveled, visited with friends, hiked, back packed, volunteered, read books, played, loved and generally enjoyed life. What more could I possibly want?

I don’t know. Sometimes it just feels like something is missing though for the life of me I can’t figure out what it could be. So, now, the days are already getting longer, and I’ve got so many plans for 2013 that I can hardly believe I can fit it all in. 

That’s what I need, I guess, lot’s of plans, enthusiasm for new classes, new places to go, my mom coming to visit. I’m done looking back, it’s over with and can’t be changed. Now, it’s time to look forward. There’s a brand new shiny year starting tomorrow. 

I can hardly wait.